Accident Story

Biking Gone Horribly Wrong 

February 2019 

Xavier F. 

I’m learning to entertain my audience through a recount.

I was at my wonderful home with my fun dad and my very stupid older Sister. My dad wanted to do something in this hot sunny weather so he decided to take us to a humongous concrete biking track. It was a very long, hot thirty minute drive from my house to the biking track. When we arrived, it was much bigger than I thought.

When we lined up our bikes to start the track. Just as we were going to start someone zoomed past us rudely. When we first started biking, my dad and I went slow because I just learnt to ride on my black bike. However us going slow did not stop my sister from speeding off.

My Dad and I started to catch up and before I knew it I was beside her. We were approaching an almighty ramp, you could go up it or around it. I had just learnt how to bike so I went around it, my sister on the other hand had big different plans

My dad and sister obviously went over the ramp, my Dad landed it, but when my sister went over it 

wasn’t pretty. She went over but didn’t land quite right. Crack ka-ching, I saw my sister lying on the ground crying, screaming and holding her head. When she stood up it was like she was a blood waterfall. My dad rushed us to our friends house because their mother is a doctor. She examined my sister and she said that she has a concussion, that wasn’t allowed tv for a week, As you can imagine my sister wasn’t happy about this. She stayed at home for a few days and now she's ok.